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Hello me again i really like do write poems so here goes another:

Like the cloudy day outside
my soul is also dark
beeing by the window side
and just looking at the park

The rain makes me think
about things that i hate
like the way i don't like pink(singer)
to how did i lose a mate

rain is a single drop of cold
that frozed my heart
with things that people told
that broke me a part

this is godbye but not farewell
because i'll see you again
if it is in heaven or in hell
whenever i see a drop of rain

I hope you like it and here is my mew poem bye!
PS: I didn't put the chords on this one but if you want ask me and i'll give them to you.

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Conceição Silva Comment by Conceição Silva on November 18, 2009 at 9:23am
I've always known that our school had some hidden talents. You're definitely one of them. Nice text....
Cisne Comment by Cisne on November 9, 2009 at 11:41pm
Nice poem ;)
I miss our drama lessons... :)

Swan.

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